Ahead of the crit at the Elmwood studio. Joel and I wanted feedback on our concept and how we might make the presentation of it stronger.
The crit group highlighted that the images were very small, and less impactful. They highlighted that the presentation should make a statement, and having lots of things going off on one board was not the way to submit.
The crit group highlighted that the copy on the boards was good and easy to read, however in places it was a tad more than needed.
How will I act on this?
To act on this I will increase the amount of boards, but dramatically decrease the amount on each board. I will take on board the comments about the copy and proceed to decrease this as much as possible in order to make a more impactful presentation, and a more concise delivery.
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